Darth vs Doc - Action/Sci-Fi Short Film


#1

Originally posted for a contest. I’m not looking for criticism on the writing, image, or sound quality; all of these were horrible and was either on purpose or unavoidable. Mostly looking for criticism on the cinematography and editing. Thanks!


#2

Its weird but I think its well done.


#3

You’ve got a lot of shots that are really close to the actors, making it difficult to properly establish location, design readable action, and to form some good looking compositions.

The rhythm of the sequence wasn’t quite working for me either. That’s just something you need to keep practicing at. Good luck on the next one.